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After Goodlake’s

by Terence Young

Fergus Goodlake is a passive, middle-aged man with prostate trouble who up until now has managed to amble through life taking the path of least resistance. The latest of three generations of Goodlakes to own an eponymous deli in Victoria, Fergus has made waves in his otherwise predictable existence by carrying on a protracted affair with a much younger woman, despite the fact that he is generally satisfied with his 25-year marriage. Inevitably, Fergus gets sloppy, and his wife, Annie, discovers a paper trail exposing Fergus’s adulterous ways. The irony for Annie is that she had recently been entertaining the notion of an affair but never seriously considered the possibility that Fergus might act on a similar impulse.

Terence Young’s first novel (after one well-received collection each of short-stories and poetry) is a domestic drama striving toward the exalted minimalism of such writers as Richard Ford, Raymond Carver, and Carol Shields. Young’s writing, however competent, lacks the subtlety and finesse of these luminaries, and his attempt to pull the sublime out of the mundane never really succeeds.

The chief problem here is a set of characters that are hard to care about because they seem to care so little about themselves. The fact of Fergus’s affair offers the reader hope that perhaps there is an inner fire or passion bubbling beneath his placid surface, but the relationship is presented as equally banal, devoid of any sexual or emotional urgency. A pivotal scene in which Annie confronts Fergus in front of both his mistress and his son should be cringe-inducing, but fizzles because the stakes are too low.

In the end, Young’s characters walk away with little hesitation from the lives they have spent years building up. It is with a similar relieved spirit that the reader leaves their world at the novel’s end.

 

Reviewer: Emily Donaldson

Publisher: Raincoast Books

DETAILS

Price: $21.95

Page Count: 360 pp

Format: Paper

ISBN: 1-55192-683-0

Released: Apr.

Issue Date: 2004-5

Categories: Fiction: Novels